Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Detailed character study - Minh


 
Mihn
1.      How would others characters describe his character?
Sophie describes him as an attractive Asian guy, who is tall and skinny. "A long face with high cheekbones and worm brown eyes." (Pg 147)   He had very badly cut, jet black hair.  
2.  How would you describe the relationships that his character has with others?
He has a very good relationship with Sophie, as he is attracted towards her. He also has a relationship with his older brother who was in jail, and he seems to be the only one in the family that doesn't hate him. His relationship with his family is quite average, much like other's, but does not like that they don't like their eldest son. His relationships with others are not mentioned.  
3. How does this character change throughout the story? How would you describe him or her?
 
His character doesn't change at all in the story, however he keeps his relationship with Sophie even after the accident. His perspective changed on the Big Event, and he doesn't blame Sophie. He seems like a patient and loving person, who still has feelings for Sophie. This also shows that he is a forgiving person.  
4. What key themes does this character help the reader to understand?
Some evident themes this character helps the reader understand are, the theme of teenage love, the theme of patience and the theme of forgiveness. Teenage love is shown very much in this story and it is very clear that Sophie is madly in love with him. The theme of patience is also shown because of the quote "I've been waiting for you." (Pg 389) This quote can also be used for the theme for forgiveness as it shows that he has forgiven her. 
The plot helps the reader understand the feelings Mihn has for Sophie, even at the end of the book.

Detailed character profiles - Geraldine


Geraldine  

*How would your character describe himself/herself?

 Geraldine would describe herself as trendy, young and up to date with everything. She always needs to be in control of the situation and thinks people should live the way she desires. She feels as though she's doing what’s best for the person when really it isn't.  
 
Geraldine would describe herself as being successful as she has a big house, doctor husband, two daughters and lots of money. Sophie at the start of the book would describe her mother as being a horrible, vain, jealous and a self-obsessed person, her sisters Fran and Monica would agree with this.  Sophie is quoted saying “at the time jealousy seemed to fit in well with the rest of my mother’s characters trait- she was obsessive, mean minded, controlling and vain… just to name a few.” but later in the book Sophie in her head is asked by Mr Schmidt if her mother is a horrible person where Sophie replies “I’ve portrayed her badly, I adore my mother.” This shows that Sophie deep down does love her mother but something has happened since being a teenager that has made her have this anger towards her.
* How would other characters describe this character? Try to include as many variations as possible and indicate why there might be differences between characters.

The words used but the other characters to describe Geraldine or when they are talking about her are quite nasty and very emotional showing that they have a problem with her. Monica thinks of Geraldine as being uninteresting. Fran doesn’t know what to make of Geraldine as she finds her very aggravating. This character does not have any positive relationships with other characters. Everyone at one time has been angry with her and find her hard to get along with. This character develops and so do her relationships with Sophie and Fran.

 Sophie- Sophie describes her mum as very controlling and stuck up. She believes her mum is very selfish and speaks her mind, not caring the outcome.

Fran- Fran believes her sister is very rude to others, plain and boring. She thinks she's is also, very stuck up.

 * How would you describe the relationships that this character has with others?

Geraldine doesn't have a strong relationship with either Fran nor Sophie. She has cut herself off from the majority of the family and really only cares about herself. This is why the others have those strong feelings towards her. She hasn't got any strong relationships because she's so self-centred and everything seems to revolve around her. 

 The relationships get better and improve as they start to understand Geraldine better.  On page 327 we are shown another side to Geraldine and how much she cares for her daughter. Geraldine has just seen Sophie for the first time after her being with Fran. She says “Could I just… hold you for a minute…”  This sheds a light on the way Geraldine has been feeling about this situation with her relationship with Sophie. This gives us the impression that she has missed and cares deeply about Sophie. Since Sophie has been away, Geraldine has had time to reflect on their relationship.

* What key themes does this character help the reader to understand?
 
Geraldine’s role in the novel gives readers an insight into how this family functions and the tension between the characters. Most of the anger from characters is pointed towards Geraldine. Geraldine helps the reader understand how she tries to stay strong but deep down she has a lot of problems herself which we don't find about until towards the end of the novel. Before that we only get Fran's, Sophie's and one stage, Amy's view of her but we were never really in Geraldine's shoes.

Detailed character profiles - Amy and Jimmy


Amy

In groups, you are going to develop a detailed character profile of one of the major characters that we can post on the class blog.

 After you have been allocated your character, you need to put together information that provides us with as much detail as possible about this individual. Use the following questions to guide you:

How would your character describe himself/herself?

·         She likes to stay in one place and doesn’t care if she doesn’t see the world. pg 109
·       Smart.
 
How would other characters describe this character?

·         Fran describes her as an “eminently sensible” friend. pg 108
·         Fran describes her as seeing clearly where the problem is and she doesn’t beat around the bush. pg 103 
·         Sophie describes her as “that little grey haired woman, who smiles all the time and looks like a mouse” pg 125 

How would you describe the relationships that this character has with others?

·         Fran’s bestfriend
·         Friends with Jimmy- lived with their family when she was younger
·         Amy’s mum is Slyvia- has never met her mum
·         Create a strong bond with Sophie

How does this character change throughout the story? How would you describe him or her?

·         Opens up about her life and becomes more open. she tells sophie about her past and when she met Raymond.
·         She becomes more forgiving

What key themes does this character help the reader to understand?

Through the use of first person/past tense in Amys 1970 chapter, it helps the reader understand what happened in Amy's childhood and how she developed when she grew up.

·         Perception
·         Forgiveness
·         Love
·         Understanding
 
Jimmy O’Brien
 - How does this character change throughout the story? How would you describe him or her?
 When Jimmy was 19 he was absurdly handsome. “Six foot, his shoulders board and his waist slim.” (P29) in 1970 Jimmy went to the Vietnam War. And now these days when he was at the city “Jimmy’s marriage folded for good, he had a heart attack” which convinced him to go back to Ballingo for early retirement and now he owns a bar and has a daughter that goes to university and her name is Blue. He has put on some weight and he hair is streaked with grey and it is thick and wavy.
 
- How would other characters describe this character? Try to include as many variations as possible and indicate why there might be differences between characters.
 Each character describes Jimmy in a different way, Fran for instance describes Jimmy as ‘ absurdly handsome ‘ with ‘ big, deep, blue eyes’ (page 29) from this description the reader realises that jimmy is very much a handsome brother that has everything going for him looks wise, later on in the text this view of jimmy is further establish by Geraldine when she talks as Jimmy as ‘so handsome’ (page  292) even thought he has just returned from the war. But the reader soon begins to realise that Jimmy has been broken in the war and even more after when his best friend Blue kills him self.  After this point jimmy is described as ‘fundamentally wreaked’ (page 313) by Geraldine and Fran describes him constantly as being broken. The reader never true finds out if Jimmy gets better but the text dose seem to indicate that he has been improving and so has peoples opinions of him.


Geraldine and Robert think that Jimmy is unstable and unsuitable and not a good influence on Sophie. This is shown on page 10 when Robert asks Fran to let him know that if Sophie begins, "spending a lot of time with jimmy... Or any other unstable...or unsuitable person."

On page 10, it is also stated that Geraldine was "mortified" by Jimmy's actions when he, "took himself off alone into the centre of the city with a loaded shotgun..." And was, "firing randomly into the bushes".

 In the book, it is shown that Fran feels sympathetic towards Jimmy when people don't view  him in a positive light. Because of this Fran begins to feel as though she has to defend Jimmy in order to protect him. This is shown on page 10 when Fran states, "she'd often thought darkly that it was chief role in life: defending Jimmy". It is also shown that Fran loves Jimmy. This is shown on page 30 when she states that she, " simply adores ...


What key themes does this character help the reader to understand?
Jimmy helps the reader to understand Fran and Amy’s relationship and the relationship between Raymond and Fran.  Jimmy also has a big part in Sophie’s recovery and how she settles into Fran’s life.
 
Robert Douglas- Robert Douglas is Geraldine's husband. He works as a successful bowel surgeon and supplies his family (a wife, two daughters, and one son) with large amounts of money (page 1). He was supportive towards young Sophie when Geraldine refused to let her go to ballet classes (82-83), however, Sophie still does not like him.  


 

 

Detailed Character profiles - Sophie and Fran

Sophie
 
How would your character describe himself/herself?

Toward the start, Sophie seems resentful and misunderstood. “The dragon, that bitch commonly known as my mother…” Sophie would describe herself as fat, unwanted, depressed, insecure and misunderstood. Sophie is extremely resentful toward her mother as seen above.
 
How would other characters describe this character? Try to include as many variations as possible and indicate why there might be differences between characters.

Fran first thought of Sophie as dead and surprised by how much weight she had put on. All characters seem to be superficial when they talk about Sophie’s weight gain. Fran states, “… she has put on so much weight and her face is so sullen. She looks dead.” Geraldine, Sophie’s mother, says to Sophie, “You are not good with people. Have no personality to speak of!” This resentment towards her daughter shows the conflict of personality between Sophie, Geraldine and Fran.
 
How would you describe the relationships that this character has with others?

I would describe Sophie as vulnerable and immature, although Sophie thinks she is just misunderstood. This is personified when Sophie, who has only known Mihn for one week, decides to pursue a sexual relationship with him. “I had become a mass of desire and longing.” (158) 
 
How does this character change throughout the story? How would you describe him or her?

Sophie develops from a teenager to a young woman. She furthers her relationships with her family members and grows more confidence throughout the novel. The first time the new maturity shines is when she agrees to make pottery for the school fete. “It pleased me very much that she’d remembered.” For once, Sophie actually recognises and appreciates what someone has done for her.

What key themes does this character help the reader to understand?

Sophie’s insecurity is a key theme to help the reader understand how destructive insecurity is to teenagers. “I suppose I did feel like a fat disgusting dag, just sitting there at the computer.”
 
Fran
 
How would your character describe himself/herself?

Fran would describe herself as being an average person. She would down grade herself and make others look better. Fran does see herself as always being there for others and can't help it but put others problems before hers. Fran is the type of person that feels bad for saying no to things in life and is not happy unless everyone else is. “Why, why do I buy into all that stuff?” (P.6), this is moment where Fran is asking herself why can she never say no to helping people. “How come she still has all of that power over me?” (p.6), this is an example of where Fran shows that although her sister has blocked her out of her life for twenty years she can still control her and has power over her. This is more a guilt factor of what Fran did in the past and her feeling that she still needs to make it up to Geraldine. Lastly, Fran never loses touch with reality and has always believed that everything will turn out ok in the end.

 How would other characters describe this character? Try to include as many variations as possible and indicate why there might be differences between characters.

Other characters would describe Fran as being very caring, cooperative and very good at helping others. Fran is also very creative and artistic and is the “normal/average” daughter in their family. Fran would be described as very down to earth and on par with reality. She knows that life has its struggles  and doesn’t take any thing for granted. “ I have to admit, to a tiny feeling of intense pleasure in all of this. Geraldine is having a struggle with her daughter… Wow Mrs perfect has come down to deal with the real world for once.” (p.93) This quote suggests that Fran does have a little bit of negative feelings towards other people and is not “perfect”. This also suggests that others think that she enjoys looking after others where all she really wants is her own space. “I see that she both looks like my mum, but doesn’t. Shes slim, but bigger than mum and fair skinned, but her hair has streaks of gray in it.” (P.71) This is how Sophie describes Fran when she first arrives in Ballingo.

How would you describe the relationships that this character has with others?
This character has a strong relationship with Amy and Sophie but is distant and awkward with her sister Geraldine. She only has a relationship with the ones that are true friends and have always been there for her. Fran only has a few close friends that she can trust, but that’s what she prefers. “Geraldine! Who hadn’t spoken willingly to her in twenty years.” (p.7) This quote tells the reader that Fran does not have a close relationship with her sister. Fran expresses that she trusts her brother as she states “I smiled ruefully, thinking that Jimmy was about the only person in the world who I would take that king of jibe from.” (P109-110). Amy also expresses that her relationship with Amy is very strong as she states “I had hardly even had to explain things to her, my soul mate since we were 12.” (P96)

 
  How does this character change throughout the story? How would you describe him or her?
Fran’s relationship with Geraldine and Sophie are the major things that change throughout the novel. Fran and Geraldine were close sisters at the start of the novel, until Geraldine breaks up with Paul, and Paul kisses Fran. This is evident when Fran asks Paul “You told Geraldine that…her voiced dies away to a whisper. Told her you… loved me?” (p.59) This shows that Fran does care about both her sister and Paul, and is the start of the distance between Geraldine and Fran. At the beginning of the novel Fran hated the idea of having a teenager around her house and this soon changed as she got to know Sophie and built up a strong relationship with her. She found that her and Sophie had many similarities and that they could relate to each other in many situations. This similarity is expressed when Sophie and Fran are talking and she says “But I was remembering dad telling me the story when  I was only 17 and it somehow seemed sad to be telling another 17 year old from the next generation.” (P101)

 What key themes does this character help the reader to understand?

Fran helps the reader understand that relationships between people can change, progress and go down hill, but at the end of the day family will always be there for you. This is evident when Geraldine writes Fran a letter saying “At the time I envied you, your do-gooding instincts but lately I began to think that, seeing you did it so well with dad, then you might be able to help Sophie.” (P114) She also gives the reader an understanding of the different types of relationships that humans can have and how they are dealt with.

 

 

 

Paragraph feedback


Year 10 paragraph feedback

Read the following feedback and make sure that you understand it. Ask about anything you are unsure of tomorrow.


Specify the characters you will deal with in the topic sentence.

Usually you should use present tense.

Narrative voice v character's voice - when a chapter is written in third person, you need to distinguish between the character's voice which we see in dialogue when he or she speaks and the narrative voice which might still give us the character's perspective.

Majorly is not a word - it is slang. Substitute another word such as strongly

Do not use & - write the word and

Do not write numbers eg 8, write the word eight. This does not apply to page numbers which are written as numerals.


Punctuation

 Apostrophes - Geraldine's relationship
                       The reader's experience
                       Readers see Geraldine's ..

Commas - mark off the introduction to a sentence -

 By hearing Amy's voice, ...
Through the use of Amy's voice, ....

Commas - mark off extra information in a sentence, including the name of a text -

 In the novel, Chain of Hearts, the reader .
 In Chain of Hearts

 Spelling

Achieves
Receives
Opinion

Thursday, May 2, 2013

Character Profiles

In groups, you are going to develop a detailed character profile of one of the major characters that we can post on the class blog.

After you have been allocated your character, you need to put together information that provides us with as much detail as possible about this individual. Use the following questions to guide you:

*How would your character describe himself/herself?
* How would other characters describe this character? Try to include as many variations as possible and indicate why there might be differences between characters.
* How would you describe the relationships that this character has with others?
* How does this character change throughout the story? How would you describe him or her?
* What key themes does this character help the reader to understand?

For each of the sections that you address, consider the various positioning techniques that Maureen McCarthy is using and also take the time to include quotations to support your claims. By combining all of these things you are practising your analysis and your synthesis.

Some positioning techniques that you could consider:

Language choices
Plot
Setting
Characterisation
Point of view
Use of first and third person
Imagery

Wednesday, May 1, 2013

Character list

Daniel is Fran's husband. He has died but Fran has not told us how. Fran describes him as 'the best man she ever met' so clearly their relationship was positive. She is not quite yet over Daniels death and she talks as if it has just happened so we can assume that it was recently that he died. She met Daniel at the school dance classes and she said it 'took a couple of years' for them to become a pair but from this they would still have been quite young so they would have been together a long time.

Lauren Douglas - Sophie's older sister studying medicine in her fifth undergraduate year (p86) Lauren is 4 years older than Sophie and was allowed to go to ballet lessons. Her older brother is 23 years old and also studies medicine. They are all children of Geraldine and Robert.

Fran’s Mum:

·         Molly O’Brien
·         Trish, Jimmy, Monica, Fran and Geraldine’s mum
·         A little dependent on her children
·         Stays around the house and cooks, cleans etc. just a typical country mum
·         Very sympathetic towards her children
·         Likes to please anyone
·         Calm and does not get easily angry
·         Lives in the old house in Ballingo

Mai’s Mother

Mrs Duong is plump round and small lady with a big smile and red face. She got pregnant with Mai in a refugee camp when they where on there way from Vietnam. She speaks very little English but is very welcoming.

Blue
 Jimmy's best friend, Blue, is a young soldier who is twenty-two and he fought in the Vietnam war. He became very traumatised. He fitted in like a brother to Jimmy. Special information is to be found on page 295.
Jimmy
  • -   Jimmy is Fran’s older brother but younger than the older sisters
  • -   He is absurdly handsome – filed out chest, dark bristle covered chin, deep blue eyes
  • -    ‘Jimmy had turned into a heart-throb in a matter of months’ (pg. 29-30)
  • -   Fran and Jimmy shared their childhood together
  • -    Fran adores Jimmy
  • -    Jimmy went to Vietnam
  • -    ‘Their brother, Jimmy, at nearly fifty was still wild enough to make people nervous’ (pg. 9) 
Fran is Sophie's aunty and Geraldine's sister. She is an accomplished artist who went to art school in the city when she was younger. After her sister's fiancĂ©e falls in love with her and calls off the wedding to Geraldine, Fran and her sister have a fight which lasts many years. Geraldine comes to Fran with her troubled daughter Sophie, who ends up living with Fran for a while. She was married to Daniel, who past away, and is close with her brother Jimmy, and her best friend Amy.  

Sophie is the main character. She is a troubled teenager, where certain past experiences in her life have changed her as a person. All of the characters in the book eventually connect back to Sophie actions and thoughts. Her mother is Geraldine and her mums sister is Fran. She is sent to Frans  when her immediate family could not deal with her. Her connection with Fran becomes stronger throughout the novel and becomes very important.

Amy Johnston is Fran's best friend who was abandoned with her aunts by her mother Sylvie as a young child. Amy likes Patsy and, owns the shop that Sophie works at and is a hard worker, a trait she received from her grandfather.
Mihn is Mai’s brother. Sophie develops a crush on him and soon begins dating him. Through the reader’s eyes, Mihn is described as “very thin and quite tall, with badly cut, long, course hair.” (pg.147)

Trish was the second oldest sister of Geraldine, Fran, Monica and Jimmy and is Sophie’s aunt. This character dies of breast cancer when Sophie was 14 or 15. Sophie quotes Trisha as being “reasonably nice”. P70
Interesting Page Numbers:-       P42 –Trish Alive-       P70 –Trish Dead

Mai Duong Sophie’s friend
They are in the same maths and history class. Mai is a Asian girl cropped jet-black hair and clear, very pale ivory skin. Mai is from Vietnam she has 2 older brothers and 2 younger sisters. She is really good at drawing but she is going to become a doctor like Sophie.

Mai’s eldest brother Truc
He is I jail because he was dealing with drugs and he didn’t like school. Truc’s name wasn’t allowed to be mentioned in the house because their parents were too ashamed. And his name was call after their grandfather.

Geraldine
Geraldine is the mother of Sophie and the sister of Fran. Geraldine is a nurse who married well (Robert- Bowell surgeon). Geraldine is jealous of her sister Fran, as she looked at the photo of Fran in the paper “with this tight blank look on her face and turned away”. (Pg 2). She is obsessive, mean minded, controlling and vain. She cannot handle her daughter at the moment as she is out of control so sends her out to her sister Fran’s place for a couple of weeks to try and get the old Sophie back. 

Ruby Mary O' Brien was Fran's only aunt (her dad's only sister). She died at age seventeen, by drowning in the Ballingo river in 1924. Fran did a painting of Ruby in her red dress drowning in the river. (Pg 46-47)
Robert Douglas- Robert Douglas is Geraldine's husband. He works as a successful bowel surgeon and supplies his family (a wife, two daughters, and one son) with large amounts of money (page 1). He was supportive towards young Sophie when Geraldine refused to let her go to ballet classes (page 82-83); however, Sophie still does not like him.  

Mr O'brien
-father of six children
-married to Mrs O'brien
Doesn't support Fran very well in her wedding situation